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Miriam the Butterfly 🦋

She’s mine - you can’t have her..

By Grz ColmPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2023
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Miriam the Butterfly 🦋
Photo by Anne Lambeck on Unsplash

Magical Miriam,

Mastered many masterclasses,

Mostly mercurial majesty, minding

Mindful magnificence,

Milky mothering moments,

Making masterful magic..

Might make Miriam mine,

Magical Miriam’s magnificence - MINE!

-2023

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Grz Colm

Film and TV reviews, 🎞 as well as short stories and free verse poems.

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  • Antoinette L Brey8 months ago

    I loved this

  • Donna Fox (HKB)10 months ago

    Grz, I loved the melodic feel of this beautiful tautogram. Such a beautiful poem, nicely done!

  • Colleen Millsteed 12 months ago

    This is very cleverly done in a tough challenge. Well done 😊

  • Jazmin Fernandezabout a year ago

    beautiful

  • Darla M Seelyabout a year ago

    Nice

  • Testabout a year ago

    Mmmmasterful! - Annelies

  • Misham izharabout a year ago

    Love it💯

  • Ash Taylorabout a year ago

    Love this!

  • Dawn Earnshawabout a year ago

    Thank you it's beautiful 😍

  • Linda Rivenbarkabout a year ago

    I love your creation with the letter M. It is truly beautiful!

  • Vivid Masonganyikaabout a year ago

    That so nice

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    May you treasure Miriam the Butterfly :). Loved and subscribed.

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Gorgeous work! Well Done!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Just...bravo. Well deserved Top Story. Astounding work. I hearted and subscribed!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    This is excellent and the picture is gorgeous! Well done!

  • Muhammad Aliabout a year ago

    The poem beautifully portrays Miriam's alluring skills and captivating charm, leaving the audience mesmerized by her expertise and yearning to witness her enchanting magic.

  • Masterful, magical & marvelous! Well done. Congrats on top story!

  • K. C. Wexlarabout a year ago

    Gorgeous writing!

  • Shannon Loewenabout a year ago

    Great job with the challenge!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Nice one, congratulations on Top Story 🎉

  • Carly Bushabout a year ago

    I love this one!

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Cool beans!

  • Haisamabout a year ago

    Love it h

  • Only2 Legendsabout a year ago

    nice

  • Nice ✨💖Congratulations on your top story 🎉🎉✨🎉

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