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Miriam the Butterfly 🦋

She’s mine - you can’t have her..

By Grz ColmPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Miriam the Butterfly 🦋
Photo by Anne Lambeck on Unsplash

Magical Miriam,

Mastered many masterclasses,

Mostly mercurial majesty, minding

Mindful magnificence,

Milky mothering moments,

Making masterful magic..

Might make Miriam mine,

Magical Miriam’s magnificence - MINE!


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Grz Colm

Film and TV reviews, 🎞 as well as short stories and free verse poems.

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  • Colleen Millsteed 2 months ago

    This is very cleverly done in a tough challenge. Well done 😊

  • Jazmin Fernandez2 months ago


  • Darla M Seely2 months ago


  • Mmmmasterful! - Annelies

  • Misham izhar2 months ago

    Love it💯

  • Sofia Joy2 months ago

    Love this :)

  • Ash Taylor2 months ago

    Love this!

  • Dawn Earnshaw2 months ago

    Thank you it's beautiful 😍

  • Linda Rivenbark2 months ago

    I love your creation with the letter M. It is truly beautiful!

  • Vivid Masonganyika2 months ago

    That so nice

  • Loryne Andawey2 months ago

    May you treasure Miriam the Butterfly :). Loved and subscribed.

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Gorgeous work! Well Done!

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Just...bravo. Well deserved Top Story. Astounding work. I hearted and subscribed!

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    This is excellent and the picture is gorgeous! Well done!

  • Muhammad Ali2 months ago

    The poem beautifully portrays Miriam's alluring skills and captivating charm, leaving the audience mesmerized by her expertise and yearning to witness her enchanting magic.

  • Masterful, magical & marvelous! Well done. Congrats on top story!

  • K. C. Wexlar2 months ago

    Gorgeous writing!

  • Shannon Loewen2 months ago

    Great job with the challenge!

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Nice one, congratulations on Top Story 🎉

  • Carly Bush2 months ago

    I love this one!

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Cool beans!

  • Haisam2 months ago

    Love it h

  • Only2 Legends2 months ago


  • Nice ✨💖Congratulations on your top story 🎉🎉✨🎉

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