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Master The Mind

A Senryu

By Real PoeticPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Master The Mind
Photo by Reynardo Etenia Wongso on Unsplash

Today’s a good day

because what I think becomes.

That’s in my control.


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Real Poetic

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I write poetry & short stories.

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  • Tiffany Gordon 24 days ago

    Brilliant! BRAVO!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Yes! So much potential lies in each and every day! We can do it!!!

  • The Dani Writerabout a month ago

    And THAT...is the unadulterated TRUTH!

  • Silver Serpent Booksabout a month ago

    Our thoughts and focus are our entire world! It's so important to make sure we keep that in mind (ha ha). Great poem!

  • Randy Baker2 months ago

    Nice! I am fan of the senryu, in general, and of this one, in particular. I think many of us get so caught up in "the world" and its problems that we forget that we have more control over our day to day life than any of the "faceless forces" at work around us.

  • These kinda days are the best! Loved your Senryu!

  • Think it, see it, be/create it. The power of positive thinking. (And method acting.)

  • J. Jay2 months ago

    This poem is a great reminder of how powerful the mind is in influencing our attitudes. Fantastic poem!

  • Steel2 months ago

    Your talent is amazing. Keep up the excellent work.

  • Simple but SO well done. What’s in your control is what’s best to focus on.

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