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Some Loving Thoughts

By Mike Singleton 🌜 Mikeydred πŸŒ›Published 3 years ago β€’ Updated 9 months ago β€’ 1 min read

Another love poem for someone special, you know this is for you

I wasn't sure what song to choose, but "Tomorrow Robins Will Sing" by Stevie Wonder is so uplifting and beautiful which is how you make me feel.

This format is known as the Italian Sonnet, which is split into two parts. The first part flows a-b-b-a-a-b-b-a, while the second can consist of two to three rhyming sets. For this, I chose the simplest, which flows c-d-c-d-c-d.

I have kept my usual very rough iambic pentameter for each line

Thanks to Natasja Rose for sharing this definition.

β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

I love walking with you my hand in yours

With every day come new shared pleasures

Our love is something that we both treasure

I love holding and touching and kissing for hours

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I love how you love when I give you flowers

I love how we touch and then we are so sure

We so love each other, this is our future

Love when we talk making everything ours

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Our tomorrows bring us more happiness

We hold each other more every day

Our love we know will grow more , never less

Holding hands on new roads we share our way

Love will surround us so beautiful yes

Love is ours , our love forever will stay

β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

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  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Beautifully done.

  • This was so sweet and romantic! πŸ’–

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