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Love Eclipse

By The Invisible WriterPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Love Eclipse
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Every star, hidden behind the light of the sun, burns in secret for you

Circles of flame, trace around my dark spaces, in outlines of your moon

Love is a cup you fill, each time you turn my day to night, my tears to rain

I’m on Fire, burning with reflections, of your Raven’s kiss, eclipsing my lips

Passing shadow, celestial body, I need you more, every time we cross paths

Slow burn melting, two auras touching, bright into dark, lust into desire

Entice me, before you leave, bleed me dry, with your ghost, until you return

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The Invisible Writer

"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"

Charles Bukowski

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  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    The simultaneous conjuring of the emotional and the visual here is excellent.

  • LAURA MARES about a month ago

    Beautiful

  • Anna about a month ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    Incredibly well written and evocative, Will!

  • Chloe Gilholyabout a month ago

    Great lines, they all flow so nicely.

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    The last line is so good, it hits you hard and stoked a fire inside that’s haunting

  • Tiffany Gordon about a month ago

    Phenomenal work! Elegantly passionate!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a month ago

    Oooo! This was sultry and beautifully written Will!! I love it!! Great work and congrats on Top Story!!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • angela hepworthabout a month ago

    So stunningly beautiful!

  • Gina C.about a month ago

    This is so elegantly beautiful, Will! Wonderful, wonderful work! ☺️

  • Amanda Starksabout a month ago

    Oooooh, yes!! I love this approach! This is a very sensual poem without being outwardly on the nose and it works so well!! I have to hold up this line though, as it was my favorite!! "I’m on Fire, burning with reflections, of your Raven’s kiss, eclipsing my lips" Ahhh, so good!!

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    so sensual!!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, this was so hauntingly beautiful! You nailed this challenge! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Wow. This is gorgeous writing. Well done, Will.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    ‘Love is a cup you fill, each time you turn my date to night , my tears to rain.’ That one got me good, Great work, Will!

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    Oh, you brought the heat with this one! And the emotions. Beautifully written as well, loved it!!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    Ummm. I need a cold shower. Wow

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