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Love and Rage

When emotions rise

By Donna Fox (HKB)Published 10 months ago β€’ Updated 10 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - July 2023
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Love and Rage
Photo by Mathilda Khoo on Unsplash

Rage

Wipe a tear from my eyes

They run down to my chin

Hits, yell and call for help

Many mad red mark made

Pain and hurt felt

Sore ribs, jaw, arms and hand

Blue and grey spot on hips and neck

Run and hide and wait for help

Love

Lips call in lust to me

Meet mine soft and with care

Hold and pull me in

Hand on hip, nose to nose

Hand goes up my back to my neck and held my chin

Lips part and heat rose

Love is in the air

It can all feel the same

β€˜Till it does not…

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About the Creator

Donna Fox (HKB)

Thank you for stopping by!! πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ©΅

If you are interested in longer works by me, I have two books published on Amazon.

Jogger's Trail and Fox in The Hole.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  5. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Amjad Ateih Dib9 months ago

    can you please teach me how write your lovely sweet words sister ?

  • Shanica9 months ago

    Keep writing. And I will keep reading. πŸ‘

  • Jacob Damian9 months ago

    that is amazing write up please keep it up

  • Mohamed Hasan9 months ago

    love it

  • For all of us who have loved and had to close our hearts even though part of us still longed for what we knew was bad, felt this hard. Amazing work Donna

  • Grzegorz9 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Rob Angeli9 months ago

    Painful poem, but brilliant. Congratulations on top story!

  • Gerald Holmes9 months ago

    This is a powerful work of art. The ending felt like a punch to the heart. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Real Poetic9 months ago

    Now this invokes strong yet beautiful emotions. Thanks for sharing and congrats!!

  • Wonderful Top StoryπŸŽ‰πŸ’―πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰Congratulations πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Dana Crandell9 months ago

    Very real and cleverly written, Donna! Congratulations!

  • Excellent work, congratulations on your Top Story.

  • Naveedkk 9 months ago

    Congratulations on achieving top story status!

  • Sheena Docas9 months ago

    Wow awesome πŸ₯°

  • Babs Iverson9 months ago

    Courageous and raw truth!!! Left a β™₯ Congratulations on Top Story!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Donna Renee9 months ago

    β€œIt can all feel the same til it does not” oh my gosh that’s so true 😩❀️. Wonderful work, Donna!!

  • Paul Stewart9 months ago

    Yay! Congrats on an amazing Top Story, Donna! So pleased to see this here!

  • Mohammed Darasi9 months ago

    That's a great poem. A nice idea to talk about both love and rage, as they can be weirdly in the same category of emotion with us humans. It's hard writing a poem with only 4 letter words (I tried and gave up for now πŸ˜…) so it's really nice seeing how you did this deep poem with this restriction.

  • Ash9 months ago

    I truly enjoyed the contrast between the tenderness of love and pain of rage. Also the poem was vivid and in sync.

  • Alexander McEvoy9 months ago

    This struck me somewhere way deep down. I don't know exactly where, why, or how, but I'm still reeling from the impact. Beautifully done!

  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    Mmmm I felt this πŸ™ƒ

  • Test10 months ago

    Heart felt and well written x

  • ThatWriterWoman10 months ago

    I really love what you did with this piece. The comparison between hitting out with a hand and the bruises on hips with the tender hand on another's hip was beautiful! Well Done!

  • Poppy 10 months ago

    very well written!

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