Last At Bat
The Final Inning : Heartfelt Poetry / Cancer
Last At Bat
Last year I was playing baseball
Run in the yard and down the hall
Mess up my room, fix some lunch
Go to school to learn a bunch
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After school I’d shoot some hoops
Summers camping with scouting troops
Then Big C set up his shop
Trot a few feet and have to stop
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Order jumped ship, Chaos followed
Sunken eyeholes, skull hollowed
White coated docs prodding at me
Xray techs, chemotherapy
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I lost my hair a bit at a time
So my friend Joe made up a rhyme
About a boy went bald too soon
Got sunburned head if out at noon
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Hairless old boy, ain’t I a beaut
Wonder if Linda would say I’m cute
If only I could have a single kiss
Her smile is what I mostly miss
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Linda’s doing her cheerleader thing
Wonder if she’d have worn my ring
Tommy will probably ask her out
Face in pillow, scream and shout
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Kick my feet and cry just a bit
Mama would call it a hissy fit
Daddy tries to act all strong
I know he thinks he’s done wrong
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I hope he knows it’s not his fault
My love for him will never halt
Now I lay here in a hospital gown
Trying to smile as nurses frown
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Tried my best to pray for strength
On my knees for hours at length
God hasn’t answered me or Mom
Except with the big old cancer bomb
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Pain and fear they worm inside
Deadly cells in my marrow hide
Slithering deep into your guts
Rot and pestilence dig out ruts
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Pity and worry are all I see
When my friends look at me
I know they’d rather be out at play
Than in this hospital with me all day
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I try to tell them it’ll be all right
Though it gets harder not to fight
Please Mom, just send them home
Let them be outside to roam
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No need to try to give false hope
Fate tied a noose with my rope
Soon I think it’ll all be done
Barely walked, I’ll no more run
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Just fourteen and barely started
Yet soon from life to be parted
All I wanted was a chance at life
To love another, take a wife
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Cancer doesn’t care about fair
Young or old, here or there
Yes Dad, I know it’s not the same
But can’t I have one more game
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Take me out to the old ball park
I’ll round the bases till it’s dark
Get my glove and toss a quick pitch
My last ‘At Bat’ then on the bench
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Afterwards try not to feel real low
Just hold my hand, Mama, when I go
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald is a 911 dispatcher of 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Comments (1)
Sad, yet hopeful. This is do deep. If ever you’ve known a child with cancer this poem is a must read. It seems simple on the face of it, yet there are real depths here. Great work. Please write more.