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just me

crazy dream

By Rachel RosePublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

there's me.

there's me and you.

there's me and you and

we are in a boat, sailing up a mountain

to see the tornado derby.

it starts raining trail mix, naturally

we use an umbrella made of sound.

the sun a blinding black hole

my hair blooming flowers, you tower ten feet tall.

the mountain erupts and now

we are going uphill against lava, in a canoe, pulled by paper aeroplanes

to see forces of nature fight for the sky.

there's me.

there's me and you.

there's me and you and

we are laughing like we used to.

you are smiling with sober eyes.

you take my hand in yours and say...

There's me.

There's me and just me.

Startled awake, alone in bed

Cold sweat, eyes welling

I knew it was a dream when you said that you loved me.

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Rachel Rose

comically sad, embarrassingly hopeful, disgusted romantic

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Comments (4)

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    Oh wow! What a vivid and moving dream. Truly heartbreaking! GREAT poem!! Totally subscribing!

  • Savannah Svetaabout a year ago

    Oooh I love this, great imagery!! You really painted a beautiful and tragic picture. Well done!

  • Emily Watsonabout a year ago

    That's a beautiful poem. Very well written.

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