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By Mescaline BrissetPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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I extracted it of the throat of society

So that you can think

That I am an idiot and you are not

Whereas the opposite is true

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When unknown sins are committed

On others waiting in vain

I am not there so you can talk

About what I did and what I didn’t

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Yet there is nothing within range of my judgment

That went unfiltered straight into your gob

And you deserved it, every disdain

For my mind was made to defend itself

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From the illiteracy and immaturity of age

Poor skills of elevating themselves

To the glory of the only ones

Who can elaborate on the subject

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Sufficiently

But we know that’s bullshit, taking a piss

What should not have happened and yet provides

Raw material for me to try

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Twist and turn this impossible disease

Into a more recognisable reality

Where I could live

Without obstructing my view

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And throwing away rotten fruit

Of the society lacking

A critical eye on themselves

In this day and age of prevailing ignorance

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10 November 2021

revised on 5 August 2022

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in spite of everything,

don't do it.

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and your gut,

don't do it.

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