It's My Birthday
I'll blow out the sun if I want to.
Elaborate birthday
Celebrations have nothing on the
Likes of this one.
I get to blow out the sun, the
Perfect gift.
Satisfying a long held
Endeavor.
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This year I get to celebrate my 37th birthday in celestial style. The eclipse is on my birthday, the path of totality is crossing the town I was born in and totality starts at the time I was born. My hope is to blow out my candle when the sun goes out. I just have to pray for clear skies. Here's hoping!
About the Creator
Meagan Dion
My life is a little crazy. Four kids, homeschool, write, create and coffee. Coffee is a verb. Do you coffee? I aspire to blow glass and finish / publish my novel. I would like to have an impact. Also, coffee.
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Comments (23)
Fantastic love it. Great to read a light hearted take and hope you enjoy your birthday and blowing out the candle.
Happy Aries birthday early and congrats on TS - I loved your poem!
Here's to you having a truly wonderful and special birthday! At least as wonderful as your fantastically creative writing, which is A LOT!! xxx
Good one Meagan!!! Happy celestial birthday!!! Congratulations on your Top Story!!!
Really cool! What a celestial gift that will be. Hoping for clear skies!
Every line is commentative. Love it.
Powerful ending! Great poem :)
Fantastic!!! Hoping for clear skies too!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story!!!
What an amazing synchronicity, I must say. Congrats on top story, well-deserved! I wish you a fantastic birthday!
Congratulations for top story 🎉🎉🎉🎉You're on a roll! Your motivation is igniting a path to greatness
Oh wow. That is awesome. Happy early birthday. Hoping you get clear skies. Congrats on the TS.
Happy early birthday! And let's hope for a clear sky together! You couldn't wish for a better gift! Congrats on Top Story! <3
Lovely birthday gift. Hope it all went/goes well. That is epic. Congrats.
Happy early birthday. What a wild birthday too! Cosmic indeed! This poem is so cool too. The idea of blowing out the sun is vivid and awesome. Congrats on the Top Story!
Great acrostic!! What a cool way to celebrate your birthday! Loved the line “I get to blow out the sun”
Happy early birthday!!
Back to say congrats on Top Story!
Well now. This is great. Not a word out of place. So smooth and I love the idea of blowing out the sun :) Well done Meagon!
Happy Birthday to you!
May you be so blessed as to be able to enjoy the most perfect & wonderful of birthdays.
Nice 😊 Advanced Happy Birthday !!!! 🎉🎈 An good excuse to have a huge party 🥳🥳🥳🥳
Happy birthday! 🍾
May I ask when your birthday is? I am wondering if it is a challenge inspired ECLIPSE on your birthday or a total eclipse coming my way? I have read nothing about it in Sweden where I live. I loved your acrostic poem either way!