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It's My Birthday

I'll blow out the sun if I want to.

By Meagan DionPublished 18 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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It's My Birthday
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Elaborate birthday

Celebrations have nothing on the

Likes of this one.

I get to blow out the sun, the

Perfect gift.

Satisfying a long held

Endeavor.

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This year I get to celebrate my 37th birthday in celestial style. The eclipse is on my birthday, the path of totality is crossing the town I was born in and totality starts at the time I was born. My hope is to blow out my candle when the sun goes out. I just have to pray for clear skies. Here's hoping!

Acrostic
25

About the Creator

Meagan Dion

My life is a little crazy. Four kids, homeschool, write, create and coffee. Coffee is a verb. Do you coffee? I aspire to blow glass and finish / publish my novel. I would like to have an impact. Also, coffee.

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  • Raymond G. Taylor14 days ago

    Fantastic love it. Great to read a light hearted take and hope you enjoy your birthday and blowing out the candle.

  • Andrea Corwin 14 days ago

    Happy Aries birthday early and congrats on TS - I loved your poem!

  • Sandra Tena Cole14 days ago

    Here's to you having a truly wonderful and special birthday! At least as wonderful as your fantastically creative writing, which is A LOT!! xxx

  • Good one Meagan!!! Happy celestial birthday!!! Congratulations on your Top Story!!!

  • Caroline Jane15 days ago

    Really cool! What a celestial gift that will be. Hoping for clear skies!

  • Every line is commentative. Love it.

  • angela hepworth17 days ago

    Powerful ending! Great poem :)

  • Babs Iverson17 days ago

    Fantastic!!! Hoping for clear skies too!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • What an amazing synchronicity, I must say. Congrats on top story, well-deserved! I wish you a fantastic birthday!

  • Ameer Bibi17 days ago

    Congratulations for top story 🎉🎉🎉🎉You're on a roll! Your motivation is igniting a path to greatness

  • Cathy holmes17 days ago

    Oh wow. That is awesome. Happy early birthday. Hoping you get clear skies. Congrats on the TS.

  • Anna 17 days ago

    Happy early birthday! And let's hope for a clear sky together! You couldn't wish for a better gift! Congrats on Top Story! <3

  • Novel Allen17 days ago

    Lovely birthday gift. Hope it all went/goes well. That is epic. Congrats.

  • Happy early birthday. What a wild birthday too! Cosmic indeed! This poem is so cool too. The idea of blowing out the sun is vivid and awesome. Congrats on the Top Story!

  • D.K. Shepard17 days ago

    Great acrostic!! What a cool way to celebrate your birthday! Loved the line “I get to blow out the sun”

  • Davina Z. McKee17 days ago

    What an exciting cosmic event! Great poem, and I hope you have an amazing Solar Return. ♈️

  • Vocal Team17 days ago

    Happy early birthday!!

  • Paul Stewart17 days ago

    Back to say congrats on Top Story!

  • Paul Stewart18 days ago

    Well now. This is great. Not a word out of place. So smooth and I love the idea of blowing out the sun :) Well done Meagon!

  • Shirley Belk18 days ago

    Happy Birthday to you!

  • May you be so blessed as to be able to enjoy the most perfect & wonderful of birthdays.

  • Mariann Carroll18 days ago

    Nice 😊 Advanced Happy Birthday !!!! 🎉🎈 An good excuse to have a huge party 🥳🥳🥳🥳

  • Kendall Defoe 18 days ago

    Happy birthday! 🍾

  • ROCK 18 days ago

    May I ask when your birthday is? I am wondering if it is a challenge inspired ECLIPSE on your birthday or a total eclipse coming my way? I have read nothing about it in Sweden where I live. I loved your acrostic poem either way!

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