In Death, We Don’t Part II
A continuation of part I
Yearning for a
Second chance.
Replaying the moment
That we danced—
Elegantly at the
Engagement party.
Nothing could’ve made
That day better.
Now I sob, and
Write your ghost letters.
Do you read them?
How will I know…
I refuse to let you go.
You were the only
Love I’ll ever know.
It should’ve been me
Laid to rest.
You were a blessing to
This world.
Never settled for less.
I try to move on,
But you’re the best…
The only woman for me.
That’s why
I asked you to
Be my wife.
Without you,
I struggle to
Live my life.
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Comments (3)
Oh my...heartbreaking, but this says a lot in a very beautiful, if sad, way. Love it. Will you read this part next on your channel, do you think?
. . . and here is the response. Heartbreaking 💔 This is a beautiful response to the earlier poem, R.P.
It's really so hard to move on 🥺💔