If Saturn Were A Person
My affinity for Saturn
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Day 35/366 days of writing pieces in 2024.
The above photo is from NASA’s instagram account. With the photo they wrote,”If you like it, put a ring 💍 on it.”I thought that was clever as hell. I’m kind of obsessed with this ringed beauty. Recently I found myself saying,”If I were a planet, I’d want to be Saturn.” I stare at pictures of this planet sometimes before bed. It’s interesting to me. So much so, I decided to write a poem personifying it. Although astrologists will tell you this planet is known as the disciplinarian, I didn’t include that this time around.
If Saturn were a person, oh what a sight,
A being of wonder, in the dark of the night.
With rings so majestic, encircling their frame,
A celestial beauty, filled with cosmic flame.
If Saturn were a person, their presence would astound,
A regal figure, in their majestic gown.
They'd command attention, with a graceful sway,
Leaving all in awe, as they pass their way.
If Saturn were a person, their wisdom would be vast,
A wellspring of knowledge, from the distant past.
They'd carry the secrets of the universe within,
Guiding us through galaxies, where new adventures begin.
If Saturn were a person, their heart would be serene,
A gentle spirit, with a love that's evergreen.
They'd embrace us all, with a warmth so tender,
A celestial companion, our cosmic defender.
If Saturn were a person, their laughter would resound,
A melodic chorus, with joy so profound.
Their giggles would echo, through the vast expanse,
Filling our souls with celestial dance.
If Saturn were a person, their dreams would be grand,
A visionary soul, with visions of a far-off land.
They'd paint the sky with colors, vibrant and bright,
Creating a celestial masterpiece, a wondrous sight.
If Saturn were a person, their strength would be untold,
A mighty force, with a spirit bold.
They'd weather the storms, with resilience and might,
Teaching us to persevere, even in the darkest night.
If Saturn were a person, their presence would inspire,
A celestial muse, setting our hearts on fire.
We'd gaze up at the sky, in awe and fascination,
For Saturn, the person, would be a cosmic revelation.
About the Creator
Jennifer Lancaster @jenergy17
Multidimensional Creative-preneur
Life Coach, Personal Trainer, Artist, Writer. Formerly in restaurant business for 3 decades. Soul expression is my ❤️ language. Spirituality,music, art, food and creativity fuel my life. IG @jenergy17
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