I Love It When You Ring My Doorbell
A Poem Inviting You To Ring My Doorbell
I love the simple complexity of Jack White's songs and this White Stripes song, "My Doorbell" has inspired me to write another poem. I love any form of contact from friends so this is an open invitation to everyone.
I am going to attempt the Sepigram form (the shortest, simplest version) created by Cendrine Marrouat details of which are below:
I Love It When You Ring My Doorbell
Please
Knock At My Door, Say Hello
Ring My Bell Or Give Me A Call
Please
I Love To See Your Most Beautiful Smile
And I Love To Hear Your Wonderful Voice
Thanks
Please
Come In. Have A Cup Of Tea
Come Here and Spend Some time With Me
Please
Love It When I Make You Laugh
And Your Friendship Puts Us On The Map
Thanks
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