I don't want a horse
Horse Haiku
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I don't want a horse;
But I like the noise it makes
When hooves hit hard ground.
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Comments (32)
Such a cute poem… so much in so few words! I like the look & idea of horses but they have a history of trying & succeeding to bite me!🙄😵💫
Haha! Love this, Rachel! I feel this way about high heels too. 😂
Beautiful. Such an evocative sound! 🐎
ASMR for the win! I love that sound too!
Your poetry is interesting. Buy I love this guy's poetry 👇 https://www.facebook.com/100010296994439/posts/2183692751983937/?mibextid=rS40aB7S9Ucbxw6v I found it on Facebook and it was worth my time!.
I kinda want a horse, but it probably wouldn't like living in an apartment. And Abigail would be pissed. Nah, no horse for me.
Yes.
Nicely done!
Understandable and with good reasoning
Thank you for the inspiration 😁
perfect....
Engaging and expertly written, your story held my attention, leaving me eagerly anticipating what happens next. The way you skillfully blended emotions and suspense makes it a truly captivating experience. Please take a moment to read my work as well!
😹😹😹🥥🥥🥥🥥 🐴 🐎 🐎
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This made me smile! Charming haiku!
Nice!
Fantastic!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Congrats - Super cute! Though horses kind of scare me!
I don't want a horse But, I wouldn't mind riding Atop a Mustang
My wife wants a horse. I'd just like to admire them in their fields, paddocks. I resonate with this poem and congrats, chum (using it again for cementation...is that even a word) on a fine little Top Story!
I really like this! It captures the idea of being able to enjoy something, like something, without having to be fully immersed in it, without having to be an expert. It’s ok to just enjoy simple things and leave it at that. Very cool!
How can anyone not want a horse? Okay, I no longer want a horse. And quite honestly, this haiku resonates greatly with me, for I still love the idea, look & sound of them.
And I like hearing these in your haiku. I’d like a horse. Not good at taking care of things though..and I don’t have the pennies. ;)
Yes I love that sound and the sound of heels as well. Both are powerful in their own ways! Loved your Haiku!
nice!!!