Empty the house.
In my hour of comfort,
I will never
dream of seeing another face,
save yours.
I will strip away
the layers
of things I have worn
for the sake of others.
Exoskeleton—
feathers
singed beyond repair,
a fissured mask
casted
from an unnamed woman
blessed only with the visage
of a deity,
and a crown so heavy
it ruptured
a vertebrae once before.
I will take my slumber
bare like the shore
at low tide,
no need to hide
skin that has lacked
breath for weeks,
and, sometimes, centuries.
In my hour of comfort,
I will search for
all the secrets
I have buried in our nest
like acorns stored for the cold—
Yesterday evening,
the bartender smiled
but didn’t mean it
because she remembered
your name
and you forgot hers.
There was a child
on the train
who silently wilted;
He wanted to sing,
but his mother wouldn’t
entertain it.
Our dogs
don’t understand
why you kiss me
and not them—
You never question
the noteworthiness
of these fragments.
Instead,
you will perch my head
atop your chest
then let them trickle
and pool into your navel
for safekeeping.
In my hour of comfort,
we will drink tea
enriched with all the spices
in our cabinet
and use cinnamon sticks
like straws.
We will draw pictures
on each other’s
backs with curious fingertips
and take careless
guesses
at the resemblance.
When the Moon
shines through the drapes,
I will remind you
that she is my mother,
and, together,
we will bask in the charm
of her comfort.
About the Creator
Sam Eliza Green
Wayward soul, who finds belonging in the eerie and bittersweet. Poetry, short stories, and epics. Stay a while if you're struggling to feel understood. There's a place for you here.
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Love this whole thing. So familiar, so sweet.
Love your writing! Beautiful!