Steamy shower air
Wild candle flame dances fast
To sweet rhythm and song
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (4)
This was very hot and steamy. I need to shower after it. I also am now subscribed. Brenton led me here with his...bathroom haikus lol.
Oooo, very hot and steamy! Well done!
I wish; this is me: the cold tap is fucked manky bathroom looks like shit ceiling fan spiders
Pretty steamy and sensual 🙃great job!