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Hot Air Balloon Ride

A Poem

By Mother CombsPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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Up, up, up

Above the trees

We float

In baskets

Made to be held

By balloons

Weighted

Down with

Sandbags

To keep it

From floating

Too high

The hiss

Of the flame

As it heats the air

Inside the balloon

The view we have

As we look down

At the scenery

Passing below

I hold your hand

You lean your head

Into my shoulder

As we enjoy the wind

Blowing through

Our hair

On this

Our magic

Balloon ride

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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Comments (6)

  • Grz Colm8 months ago

    ☺️👏 Such a cool image. I’ve always wanted to do this! 😁

  • Nice adventure ♥️🎉

  • Awww, that's like such a lovely time for them! So wonderful!

  • Sandra 8 months ago

    It made imagine feel contentment, love in beauitiful simplicity and happily in the clouds... pun intended. Very nice!

  • Cathy holmes8 months ago

    That sounds like a beautiful experience. Well done.

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