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Heart of Black

A raven's heart of black

By Deasun T. SmythPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Heart of Black
Photo by Valentin Petkov on Unsplash

The raven with his heart of black

Vying to steal a tasty snack.

He arched above in tandem flight

Looking to land, left or right.

Till at last he landed near

Growing braver, not knowing fear.

For on the window sat a pie

With whips of steam rising to the sky.

Hopping closer, ’nothing to see’

Eaten, the pie was soon to be.

‘Oh’ thought the raven, the aroma was bliss

This sure was a treat he didn’t want to miss.

‘I have to have it’, he thought with an icy stare

For the pie was just lying there.

But as he tries to take a bite —

Something gave him a terrible fright.

He flew to the nearest tree in a bolt-line

Because someone else chose to dine.

The neighbour’s dog took the pie

(For the dog was a really selfish guy).

The dog munched, gobbled, and gnawed

‘Unfair, unfair’ the raven cawed.

He rest his beak, with a teary-eyed sigh

Realizing he wouldn’t get any pie.

humor

About the Creator

Deasun T. Smyth

I’m a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.

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Comments (4)

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Great flow which helped the visuals come alive. I loved it!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Delightful poem humorously written. Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Nice work❤️💯😉

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    I can see this in a children picture book, excellent poetry . I enjoy the read. I never thought I will say this, poor Raven.

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