Happiness is closer by the one who loves too detailed
Beloved he's the one who hurt
Happiness is closer
by the one who loves
too detailed
than the one who hurts
just as much.
beloved
he's the one who hurt,
but only he knows
that he is not happy either.
So happiness is on my side,
for I have offered love in detail,
but only i know
that's not good either.
Often in a relationship one of the two fights more for the relationship.
A relationship should be 50-50. Both partners need to make their relationship work, if only one is trying, the effort is in vain.If you notice in your relationship that only you are trying to make it good, it would be better to think twice before continuing to fight in vain.
The time you spend in a relationship like this is a waste of time in which you could meet someone who fights with you.
Have you suffered this?
About the Creator
Karla Andrea
I like to write poems when I'm sad.
I'm shy when it comes to my writing.
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