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Green Sand Beach

Waxing Olivaceous

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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The Green Sand Beach, "Big Island," Hawai'i

Olivine carried from Creation

Visiting stars splash us chartreuse

Crumble sparkly silicates in eons' pestle

Green deposits ground to dust on shores' mortar

Seeding our table periodic

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Verdancy arises in granulation

Atomizing the thousand thousand emeralds

Awaiting the footprints of the mesmerized

Stepping colorfully in variegated footfall

That refills as suddenly with briny answers

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We steer through colors, dyes, and tints

Our lives in shades of meaning and nuance

Nothing plants us so solidly on terra firma

As beachcombing sands of green, seasoning the sea

With starlight

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!

https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    You paint a very beautiful picture with your descriptive language and unique word choices! Great work Gerard!

  • Oh I love how this poem was inspired by Babs poem! I just read hers! You painted such a beautiful picture with your words! I loved it!

  • Novel Allen11 months ago

    I love the final stanza best. Sands of green seasoning the sea with starlight. Lovely.

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Gerald, this was beautiful!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Inspired by https://vocal.media/poets/fleeting-sands#comment-b82424d6-c30a-4d4a-888e-98fce2631171, by Babs Iverson.

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