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“Give Thanks”

And “run through the fields in your mind” - An excerpt of a Group meditation experience in free verse

By Grz ColmPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 2 min read
Top Story - November 2023
“Give Thanks”
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🙏 🧘 ✨

Now, once again, mustering that golden light,

from within,

to radiate outwards,

…Next, you gently place each of your palms on their knees,

whilst they sit,

*A wish, a prayer, a care*

They feel the energy passing through you,

to them,

your love, your..

empathy,

A divine wish for peace for us all,

A humming sensation gently erupts within both your minds,

Nearby your third eye ———————

A bridge to the edge of the universe,

A mystical experience in the everyday,

Life is magic!

With your palms still in place,

Their knees begin to relax,

A momentary sense of ease instead of pain,

As so much positive energy is coursing throughout each other’s bodies,

You almost feel as if you might pass out, yet -

You are safe and protected.

From their lightly closed eyes,

A small tear slowly rolls down their cheek,

All sure is good, for now.

And tapping back into the energies again,

Will only reinforce the positivity now felt,

A blessed rejuvenation that may last for a few days,

You both feel appreciative of this moment:

“Namaste”.

You both want to run through the fields in your mind,

And you can!

But today, this revitalisation will pleasantly suffice.

You think of the other field in your recent meditation and

wonder if the tree burns there yet again..

perhaps harnessing its once dormant energies for

healing others once more..

🌟

Quick note: this was somewhat inspired by a group meditation experience a while back, but we used some similar ‘techniques’ recently so I was thinking back to some of the feelings encountered then. It’s incredibly powerful and you can get one of the most natural “highs” of your life that I wish everyone could experience at some stage by being open to it.

Below is a link to my last piece which is somewhat connected. Last time I also posted links to two writers that have helped inspire a stream of consciousness in my writing. I don’t often have ideas that flow forth like that, but somehow practising it helps and I guess writing about something I care about doesn’t hurt either. Anyway, so here is a couple more of Paul and Kristen’s pieces (to keep the vibes radiating outward) if you should get a chance to read you definitely should to boost your mood. ☺️ ☮️

Here’s my last piece:

Here’s a superb piece from Paul that I very much like!

Here are two of Kristin’s - enjoy:

Thanks for reading.

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Grz Colm

Film and TV reviews, 🎞 as well as short stories and free verse poems.

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    Written by Grz Colm