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Gazing At Seline

How the Moon is Outshone by the Sun

By Emily Marie ConcannonPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Gazing At Seline
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"Inside and out, lovely you are,"

"Like the Moon maiden pale, gazing afar."

He said as he pressed a kissing caress,

And she pulled away slowly from against his breast.

Gazing at the Moon shimmering bright,

She answered him this wise, her voice hauntingly light:

"What knowledge of the Moon, know you, my lord?"

"Other than her complexion, of which your reason is blurred."

"One moment she's here, and the next is gone,"

"Out shone by her rival, the bright morning sun."

"So quickly your eyes are turned away,"

"So too is your heart, to the praise of the day."

"Spare me your praises, and sweet mocking words,"

"Hallow they are, and cut they like swords."

"I bid you farewell, and so praise the day,"

"For her beauty is stunning, to which you fall prey."

With that said, she melted away,

And at first he was saddened, that she left in this way.

Yet, the sun soon she rose, up over the peaks,

And his eyes were diverted by her bright rosy cheeks,

"The Moon Maiden pale, no more passed his mind,"

"And so is the love, of all of mankind."

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This poem is meant to reflect my impressions of the beautiful story of Swan Lake. The part which struct me was the manner in which the man was pulled away by the beauty of the Black Swan.

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About the Creator

Emily Marie Concannon

I am a world nomad with a passion for vegan food, history, coffee, and equality.

You can find my first novel on Kindle Vella here: https://www.amazon.com/kindle-vella/story/B09V4S7T4N :) I appreciate all your support and engagement! :)

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  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    Beautiful poem! Your words are like music.

  • Great rhyme structure and excellent syllabic flow.

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Nicely created 🥰

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Beautifully written :)

  • A beautiful set of lines

  • Fantastic poem!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Outstanding!!!💕

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