photo by Hakon Helberg on Unsplash
They said I was born to fly
But
It might break me
I may fall
I am afraid
Stop!
I can’t
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (24)
So succinct and nicely done!
Short and sweet, with a great message about how our fears can hold us back!
love this poem. It's an analogy on life in many ways, as we are too afraid to take flight in our lives and stay stuck or safe.
great entry into the challenge. I'm just sitting here thinking what it would be like to be a bird that was afraid to fly. I have a feeling the thought is going to be like a song you hear and can't get out of your head the rest of the day. lol
Great take on this, I am finding this challenge very difficult because it means I have to think
Beautiful!
I have a question I posted my story. How long does it take for it to get approved? I knew to the platform. And that's a nice bird.
You are so good at these! Beautiful! 🤍
Awesome work my friend. Good luck on the challenge.
Whoaaaa, I loveeeeee how positive this was bottom to top! Brilliant work!
It was evocative reading down, but I enjoyed it much more reading up.
I love this. <3
Oh, little bird!
Great!!😊💕
Very well thought out!
so cute and clever
this works great, especially with the photo
Sweet little entry! Good luck!
Love it!!!💕❤️❤️
Ok, you are a master at this!!!!
A great one!
Cute, and relevant
This is so good!
love this