Forsaken
(Again)
Note: This poem is another entry in Real Poetic's Mini Challenge which you can find here. The Prompt: Explore the theme of your greatest fear.
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I am used to
Watching time slowly
Stitch all my cuts closed
It has a slow but steady hand
One I have cursed more
Than thanked
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But now my wound
Seems to go untended
The world turns mercilessly
But offers me no new beginnings
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I am confined in the past
To the point of claustrophobia
Clawing at closed doors
Craving closure and
Receiving ignorance
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There are pictures on my phone
Of two best friends promising
Each other forevers
There are letters in a box
From a girl who used to
Swear she’d never leave
There are memories in my head
That consume me like a sickness
Clogging my lungs like smoke
Filling my eyes like allergies might
Squeezing my heart with
Relentless cruelty
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You are my last straw
My final breath
My breaking point
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You play on repeat
Inside my brain like
A vicious nightmare
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And I am hopelessly
Terrified that I will never
Be able to get over how
You walked away without
A single trace of
Compassion
(You used to have
So much of it)
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Comments (28)
Oh Poppy, this is breathtaking and so full of emotion. 🥹❤️ Truly wonderful job! Congratulations on Top Story!!
amazing piece, loved it!
Awesome. Really touching. Great stuff, thanks.
Wow. This resonates deeply. Thank you for writing this 🤍
Congratulations on top story 😊💕
Damn, felt every single line and word of this poem. Great work on the prompt with this one. Well done!
Poppy this was intense and melancholic! It felt passionate and driven with every word, so beautifully articulated! A very emotional and tantalizing piece! Great work!
Worth reading, grinded emotional flow. Love it deeply
Hauntings if the past live in our preseht. Surreal, yet real oietey. Congratulations 🥇
This was gorgeous. This line hurt to read (but in a good way!) "You are my last straw, My final breath, My breaking point"
I love the analogy of the confinement to the past to claustrophobia. Congratulations on Top Story!
This is awesome. Well deserving of top story.
Wow, an amazing poem. Congratulations on top story, heart-rending experience of separation, and the times that were and could have been. Bravo!
enjoyed u deserve likes
enjoyed very much! A bit dark, but feels very real and connected.
Beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS
I felt every line in this poem. Powerful, heartbreaking entry to the challenge. Congratulations!
Congratulations on your bleak Top Story🎉❤️💯😉📝👍
Heart breaking and raw, a very sad vignette of a truly lovelorn time. Excellent work❤️
So glad this got Top Story, Poppy! Yay! 🥂
Gorgeous work 😩😭❤️
Lovely, sad and always that elusive love.
Clawing at closed doors, craving closure. This is sooooo me. And that is why I'm still stuck in the past. Loved your poem!
My best friend & one time beloved was unable to say she loved me, walked away, & no longer speaks to me. This fearsome haunting has continued for over four decades.
Ugh, me too. This was so well written.