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For the Birds

A most veritable villanelle

By D.K. ShepardPublished 6 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
Second Place in Villanelle Challenge
For the Birds
Photo by Stephanie LeBlanc on Unsplash

I won’t be fooled by cunning counterfeit

In a market of lovers selling stock,

If it’s not from you, the birds can have it.

******

Crafted compliments, I don’t want a bit;

Such words are nothing more than idle talk,

I won’t be fooled by cunning counterfeit.

******

Skin meets in simple touch, a perfect fit

As hands embrace and fingers interlock,

If it’s not with you, the birds can have it.

******

Lips pressed together urgent to commit;

A kiss that sprints before it learns to walk,

I won’t be fooled by cunning counterfeit.

******

A precious stone where sunlight glints and flits

On a silver band in a velvet box,

If it’s not from you, the birds can have it.

******

Your affection is all that I’ll permit,

The rest is crumbs I’ll scatter for the flocks.

I won’t be fooled by cunning counterfeit,

If it’s not from you, the birds can have it.

love poems

About the Creator

D.K. Shepard

Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now

Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.

dkshepard.com

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Comments (43)

  • Grz Colm3 months ago

    “For the birds” indeed. This is slick-ly done and I can see why it placed in the villanelle challenge, D.K! Congrats! 😊👍

  • Denise E Lindquist4 months ago

    Congratulations on your placing in the Villanelle challenge and your top story! 🎉🎉🎉

  • Salomé Saffiri5 months ago

    wow, I enjoy reading something things well-written. Your piece has a good cadence and an easily-digestible message

  • RL Stevenson5 months ago

    Congrats, D. K., on both accounts! Very liturgical and heartwarming. Luv it... well deserved. 🫵🏾💯

  • Chloe Gilholy5 months ago

    This was wonderful. Congrats on your win.

  • Ava Mack5 months ago

    Wonderful poem! Well deserved and congrats on your win!

  • Well deserving of Top Story! "Your affection is all that I’ll permit, The rest is crumbs I’ll scatter for the flocks. I won’t be fooled by cunning counterfeit, If it’s not from you, the birds can have it." Cute photo too... today, I'm wearing new earrings... a green budgie & a yellow one!

  • Elle Marie5 months ago

    Oh wow, this was beautiful, and so real! Congrats on 2nd place, I loved it!

  • Alison McBain5 months ago

    This was very clever and romantic. I really enjoyed it!

  • Sarah Danaher5 months ago

    congrats on the win and very good form. It was a enjoyable read

  • Daphsam5 months ago

    Congratulations on your win! Great way to talk about love.

  • Natalie Wilkinson5 months ago

    Congratulations ! This is a really clever spin on the topic of love.

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Congratulations on 2nd place!!! Your poem was rather crafty. I can see why it gained the attention it deserves. Well Done!!!

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    Witty and so well crafted! Lots of amazing lines in here. 😍 Congratulations!! Well-deserved 🤗

  • Harbor Benassa5 months ago

    I love the cadence the refrain of "If it's not from you, the birds can have it" creates when it's repeated throughout the poem. Great job!

  • Shirley Belk5 months ago

    love the commitment and the symbolism of birds commiting for life

  • Paris Rosemont5 months ago

    Congratulations to you too! This is a superb villanelle!

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Congratulations on the 2nd place win!!!💕❤️

  • Hannah Moore5 months ago

    Very romantic.

  • Alison Brooke5 months ago

    Congrats on top story and a well deserved second place victory!

  • Penny Fuller5 months ago

    What a great combination of whimsy and romance. I really loved it. Congrats on 2nd place!

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    Congrats on this getting second place, a definite winner in my book but what do I know. Congrats all the same!

  • S.L. Underwood5 months ago

    Very beautiful! Congrats!

  • Morgana Miller5 months ago

    “The rest is crumbs I’ll scatter for the flocks…” this part gave me goosebumps, truly lovely. Congratulations!

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