Finding Brompton
True comfort comes once in a lifetime
Tick, tock;
He sensed it, always next to him.
Tick, tock, whir, click;
Straining—as he did, but for him.
Tick, tock, whir, click, plunge, whoosh;
Again.
^ ^ ^ ^
He strained.
A saltwater river rode along the crest of his lip to his tongue.
He lay back down.
How many days?
Were they greater or fewer than the number of his memories?
He no longer was certain.
^ ^ ^ ^
His eyes fluttered like tiny cobwebs caught by a single breeze.
The breeze left;
The rain came.
Just a sprinkle
From the corners of his eyes.
^ ^ ^ ^
The tubes conspired to constrain him.
Fingers fumbling
for the slit near his hip.
He held it, gripping tight against loss.
Pristine, shiny, precious, sharp.
Prick, pierce, plunge.
^ ^ ^
His body gulped it, all of it, down.
The train came,
And the waves.
They soared and swelled within the cave.
Still, he waited for the sun.
About the Creator
Brent Tharp
I edit STEM books. I like writing, cats, and wine, though not necessarily in that order.
I was raised by wolves in a small forest somewhere in Middle America.
Why don't ketchup bottles squirt correctly? All or nothing seems grifty to me.
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Original. Thought-provoking. And disturbing. Everything a slam poem should be.