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moving like a snail,
hammered like a battered nail,
yet we carry on!
Thank you for reading, life’s drudgeries can hammer us and slow us down, but, in spite of it, slowly we carry on.
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Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
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Comments (4)
I read this like an empowering chant. Great haiku.
So true :) Very clever!
Oh, I like this. It's so true, and it flows beautifully. Very well done.
GREAT haiku!