Eternal Love
An Ode to the Ocean, Stars and roses
You are the ocean, deep and vast,
Endless and infinite, my heart you grasp.
Each wave that crashes on the shore,
Is a reminder of the love we swore.
Your eyes are the stars, shining bright,
Guiding me through the darkest night.
In them, I see a world of wonder,
A universe of love, that I'll never surrender.
Your touch is like a gentle breeze,
That makes my heart flutter with ease.
I feel your warmth and tenderness,
And every worry, every fear, they all suppress.
Your lips are like a rose in bloom,
Soft and sweet, dispelling all gloom.
With a kiss, my heart ignites,
And my soul takes flight, towards the greatest heights.
Your voice is like a symphony,
Melodious, and full of harmony.
It echoes through my very being,
A song of love that leaves me believing.
In you, my love, I find my peace,
A haven in which my heart finds release.
With you, I am whole and complete,
My love for you, eternal and sweet.
So, my darling, hear my plea,
As I pledge my love to thee.
My heart, my soul, my life, my all,
I give to you, forevermore, until the end of time's call.
This is a heartfelt expression of the author's deep and unwavering love for their significant other. Through vivid and unique metaphors, the poem paints a picture of the beauty and depth of their love, likening it to an ocean, stars, roses, and a symphony. The extended version adds more detail and emphasis to each metaphor, creating a more complete and immersive picture of the author's love. Overall, this poem is a beautiful tribute to the power of love and the depth of emotion it can evoke.
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Manikanda Raman
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Love the rhyme scheme and the passion with which you write this piece! Breath taking and leaves me speechless! I can tell how deeply you love your significant other! Such beautiful, heartfelt work!
Beautiful words... 👍👍👍🥰
Beautifully written with vivid imagery that captures the essence of love and the natural world.👌👍👍