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Eternal

A Poetic Conversation on Life and Death's Endless Dance

By Dr. Jason BenskinPublished 24 days ago 1 min read
Eternal
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New life blossoms at the tranquil break of dawn.

As twilight descends, shadows lengthen.

Every breath is a blessing, and every moment ignites potential.

A soft melody whispers with every conclusion.

Paths of golden light embrace our dance.

Our peace is found in the stillness.

The vivid colors of the world come alive in the awakening.

As life's flame fades, stars shine brighter.

Every sunrise we greet carries hope.

We find completeness in the embrace of night.

Boundless joy echoes in our laughter.

We remain softly in the echoes of time.

We pursue our aspirations with each stride.

A lesson is gained with every autumn.

The hearts throb with intense passion, fueled by the flames of life.

The soul starts to heal in a state of calmness.

Tethered to the ground, yet striving towards heavens above,

We discover liberation in the boundless.

Hand in hand, we walk together.

As we say goodbye, we reunite again.

A seamless weave of life and death.

In the ceaseless rhythm of infinity.

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Dr. Jason Benskin

I am a dedicated writer whose work delves into the depths of human emotion and experience with a unique voice and an eye for detail.

My goal is to craft writing that resonate with readers on a profound level.

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Comments (9)

  • Amy little2 days ago

    Wonderful piece

  • Shelby 6 days ago

    Impressive work

  • Kennedy Smith9 days ago

    Beautifully written

  • John Baxter18 days ago

    Amazing poem

  • Milrose samboque19 days ago

    Beautifully written

  • Gloria Penelope22 days ago

    Wonderful poem, my favorite lines; The hearts throb with intense passion, fueled by the flames of life. The soul starts to heal in a state of calmness. You have a great talent Dr. Jason.

  • Babs Iverson23 days ago

    Fantastic free verse!!! Loving you line, "As we say goodbye, we reunite again." ❤️❤️💕

  • shanmuga priya23 days ago

    This poem is mesmerizing and thought-provoking.i enjoyed reading it.

  • This is very elegant and there's a softness to it that I deeply appreciate. Great poem!

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