Eternal
A Poetic Conversation on Life and Death's Endless Dance
New life blossoms at the tranquil break of dawn.
As twilight descends, shadows lengthen.
Every breath is a blessing, and every moment ignites potential.
A soft melody whispers with every conclusion.
Paths of golden light embrace our dance.
Our peace is found in the stillness.
The vivid colors of the world come alive in the awakening.
As life's flame fades, stars shine brighter.
Every sunrise we greet carries hope.
We find completeness in the embrace of night.
Boundless joy echoes in our laughter.
We remain softly in the echoes of time.
We pursue our aspirations with each stride.
A lesson is gained with every autumn.
The hearts throb with intense passion, fueled by the flames of life.
The soul starts to heal in a state of calmness.
Tethered to the ground, yet striving towards heavens above,
We discover liberation in the boundless.
Hand in hand, we walk together.
As we say goodbye, we reunite again.
A seamless weave of life and death.
In the ceaseless rhythm of infinity.
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Dr. Jason Benskin
I am a dedicated writer whose work delves into the depths of human emotion and experience with a unique voice and an eye for detail.
My goal is to craft writing that resonate with readers on a profound level.
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Comments (4)
Wonderful poem, my favorite lines; The hearts throb with intense passion, fueled by the flames of life. The soul starts to heal in a state of calmness. You have a great talent Dr. Jason.
Fantastic free verse!!! Loving you line, "As we say goodbye, we reunite again." ❤️❤️💕
This poem is mesmerizing and thought-provoking.i enjoyed reading it.
This is very elegant and there's a softness to it that I deeply appreciate. Great poem!