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Emily Ethereal

A Ghostly tautogram

By Donna ReneePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Emily Ethereal
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Emily expired.

Except…

Emily exists.

Emily exists encumbered.

Emily exists erratically.

Emily exists eerily.

Emily exists emotionally.

Emily exists entirely ethereally.

Emily exists enough.

Even evermore,

Eternally…

Emily exists.

~~~

Edward exists eternally.

Edward exudes evil.

Edward evaded exorcisms.

Edward ended everyone else...

…even Emily.

*** Emily is a nice ghost. Edward…well, Edward is not.***

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Donna Renee

Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.

Work in Progress: WOWH, cozy mystery (paranormal elements)

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock9 months ago

    Dirty rotten Edward! "Whatcha gonna do when he comes for you? Bad boy! Bad boy!"

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    very well done on this one!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Don't know how I missed this, seeing as how I love ghosts a lot. This was really great. Love them evil old timers.

  • Awww, & I always thought Edward was such a righteous dude! Not as righteous as Emily, but...." I absolutely love the way you express yourself, Donna. In this case, it's rather blunt, to the point, & as direct as any child I have ever heard. It's perfect.

  • Samia Afraabout a year ago

    A book in the works for kiddos, or adult kiddos, perhaps?

  • Naomi Goldabout a year ago

    Wait, this isn’t just a tautogram, it’s a full blown story! Very nice. 👻

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    I think when if we encounter either Emily or Edward it may not feel that great- lol. Love the story within the poem ♥️

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Very well done.

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Exceptional! ❤️

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Excellent!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Wow! 😍❤️ This is amazing, Donna! I am mesmerized by this!

  • Excellent take on the challenge

  • Ooooo, I like Edward, lol! Brilliant tautogram!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    This was great, I love that you made a tautogram and it had a real plot! You developed Emily and Edward well! 💜

  • Deanna Fratusabout a year ago

    Nice job

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Excellent!😉

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    Super creepy with a killer last line! Nice work!!

  • Kelly Robertsonabout a year ago

    Another great one! Keep it going! ❤️

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    You really have some strange friends! Well done.

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    You're so dang good at this! Another great story! So impressed!

  • Marsha Singhabout a year ago

    Whoa! This is incredible!

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    This is so creepy and cool.

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Another well told story in a challenging format. Awesome.

  • Madison Newtonabout a year ago

    Spooky, I love it!

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