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Eating with my fingers

Haiku honey

By Hannah MoorePublished 6 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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Eating with my fingers
Photo by Maria Teneva on Unsplash

This is my entry for the Vocal Social Society Challenge Haiku Honey. Perhaps it is about honey. Or perhaps it is about peach juice. Or thawing ice cream. It could be about meat sauce, or perhaps about gravy. Or it could be about something else. Most likely, it is about all of the things. It is about hedonism and abandonment to appetite. We don't need to sit down for this one, its quick and easy, at the sink, on the grass, wherever suits, but it will leave us sticky.

Tongue probing the cleft

Between moist, sticky fingers.

Where dripping juice pools.

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  • Ruth Stewart3 months ago

    This is double-dirty. I see toddlers eagerly licking juice. Grubby faces. But I also see sultry women eyeing their beau, licking suggestively! Awesome work.

  • Teresa Renton5 months ago

    I shouldnโ€™t love this as much as I do ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜‚Congratulations on placing ๐Ÿฅณ

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    um...what was I going to do next...probably shower in a cold, cold shower! So good, Hannah! well done!

  • L.C. Schรคfer5 months ago

    Dirrrล•ty! I love it!

  • Teresa Renton5 months ago

    Yurrrrrrmy โค๏ธ

  • I thought this was meant to be about food, although it seems to be something nice to eat , lol

  • Tiffany Gordon 5 months ago

    Fantastic!

  • I was not thinking food whilst reading this ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ very well done!! ๐Ÿ’œ perfect for this challenge! ๐Ÿ’ซโœจ

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    ๐Ÿ˜ฏgreat haiku! Perfect take on the challenge! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ’ซ

  • Rachel Deeming5 months ago

    Very sensual!

  • My first thought was mango! Loved your Haiku!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    This is a great entry. Well done.

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    Great haiku

  • Caroline Jane6 months ago

    I really like how you have approached this. A foodie how as opposed to a what. A celebration of the experience rather than the food itself. Excellent stuff!

  • D. J. Reddall6 months ago

    Delicious!

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