I am defeated by the pain..
Can't control the tears' rain...
I gave up....
Even I promised I'll never give up..
I tried to stay cool..
even when I was burning like a fool..
I Had a smile on my face...
even when it was a sorrowful case..
Tried to pull myself up and step forward...
even when i knew I'll fall over cause I'm a coward..
I placed a fake mask on my face..
even when my tears were running down swiftly, like in a race..
I wish to explain myself...
even when I know nobody will understand me...
I have tried my best..
Couldn't bear anymore I wish to leave the rest..
That's it! I couldn't pretend more...
I have touched my core..
I am defeated by the pain...
I tried so hard to play plain...
I tried so hard to tell, I'm fine..
Every night I just drank a wine..
But still I'm NOT fine...
I am defeated by the pain...
Defeated by the pain..
Oh Pain! I accept...
I lost...
Now let my eyes Rain............
(A Poem that could be read in either way, top to bottom or bottom to top , let me know your thoughts about this poem in the comments :)
Writter:Eiman Asif
Comments (3)
This was so emotional! It worked so well top to bottom and in reverse! Loved your poem!
Very creative!!
Well written! Great poem and never give up! Don’t let pain defeat you !