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A Rite that Begins After it is Reached

A poem

By K. KocheryanPublished 24 days ago Updated 24 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
A Rite that Begins After it is Reached
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We rose towards the light.

Beasts (Royals, Sovereigns, Kings) that ruled without coronation.

We fell when it became too bright.

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It was our right! As you feel it is your right.

What else could it mean through our (prominent-purposeful-powerful) creation?

We rose towards the light.

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And by the Gods (Us. Us. All of Us) we reached our great height.

Stories shined in our eyes, the beginnings of a constellation.

We fell when it became too bright.

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Even given with all our might. . .

Giants to breadcrumbs made of ashes (so many ashes) after the cremation.

We rose towards the light.

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The light you gave because curiosity (bow, bow, and pray) is your rite.

Gods coffin's exposed after excavation.

We fell when it became too bright.

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(Us; you; them) What will be next to ignite?

Distant or not your bones, bones, many bones will be read as a narration.

We rose towards the light.

We fell when it became too bright.

Villanelle

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K. Kocheryan

I write, delete, write, and on most days, delete again.

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Comments (11)

  • Dr. Jason Benskin20 days ago

    Fantastic writing.

  • shanmuga priya22 days ago

    Congratulations 🎉

  • JBaz23 days ago

    I am no expert on Villanelle style but I know what I like and this was interesting and grabbed my attention. Congratulations

  • Congratulations on your TS.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Margaret Brennan24 days ago

    Brilliantly done. Love it

  • angela hepworth24 days ago

    Beautiful work! I loved the format and your imagery was gorgeous.

  • The Dani Writer24 days ago

    A very interesting construction and format here! Definitely takes the reader out of complacency and stretches figurative limbs. A great job here and congratulations on the top story!

  • Novel Allen24 days ago

    I still don't get Villanelles, great job on it here (I think). I like the cremation and the rising towards the light references...unique. Well done.

  • This was extremely powerful! You executed this Villanelle brilliantly!

  • Sweileh 88824 days ago

    Interesting and delicious content. Keep posting more

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