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Dear Me

I am a writer

By Dana StewartPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2023
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Dear Me,

there you go again,

with midnight twinkling in our bloodshot eyes

the blank screen waits patiently

fingers tickle the keyboard with subtle pries

suddenly a spark ignites,

possibilities grow like sunflowers

tall and beautiful in the daylight

Imagination is born, birthed from an idea

And just like that, in that moment, the blinding light illuminates the darkness

and we ponder, and wonder, and think the dangerous words of

What if?

you close our eyes and we can see them

we can hear them

the characters that beg to be written

if only a moment, if only a chance

they want to have their dance

A salsa, a tango, a waltz

we can hear the music playing

As our tale unfolds,

it begins without an ending

just like life itself,

the flames of the story flicker on the page

the magic, the mayhem, the pleasure, the pain

everything is a choice -

if the ballerina pirouettes under the mandevilla

whether the chef keeps screaming ‘add vanilla’

what about the guilty magician full of strife

or maybe the devil beats his wife?

the con is still on

perhaps insert a lovely black swan

the murdered body is missing

don’t forget to add the bit about the neighbors kissing

the forgotten sailor floating in the ship’s wake

or dreadfully describe the orphan’s greatest mistake

the prison escapees lost at sea

or maybe a lottery winner only buys misery

a lonely astronaut navigating the Milky Way

how about an apothecary from Bombay?

the trophy wife with a grudge

or an anorexic teen girl that only eats fudge

a day drunk chain smoker

who doubled down one night at poker…

You seem to forget

You aren’t done yet

there’s ink in our veins,

and we will bleed the pain

because the story is mine, the choice is ours -

if he’s a lover or a fighter

the nuance is my decision

because I am the writer.

Warmest regards,

(and do try to get some sleep!)

Me

surreal poetry
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Dana Stewart

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Really enjoyed every bit of it and how you evolved into rhyming at the end, providing a cadence and picking up the pace. Really lovely and clever capture of the heart and soul of a writer.💙Anneliese

  • Gal Muxabout a year ago

    Wow! Simply wow!

  • Mohammed Darasiabout a year ago

    Such a great poem! It captured the process of creating a story very nicely. I sometimes get so many ideas at the same time and then struggle to jell them together.. usually that's what times time at the beginning of the story. can be quite annoying 😅

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    This was so inspirational. The possibilities are truly endless. Congrats!

  • Cendrine Marrouatabout a year ago

    What an incredible poem! Thank you!

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Oh wow! This was outstanding

  • Cleverly crafted quickly creating consciousness on the keys, one thought leading into another on story possibilities.

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    That was awesome! I love the way you cycle through all the possible choices and the amazing metaphors and imagery you used to describe the process of writing. That was really so well done!

  • Kelly Robertsonabout a year ago

    Write on!! This is wonderful and truly speaks to all writers. I especially love the lines "there’s ink in our veins, and we will bleed the pain" amazing job!

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    What a rallying cry for every writer on this platform! Well done and congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    WOW! Simply Flawless, Phenomenal Work! BRAVO! 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    ‘the magic, the mayhem, the pleasure, the pain’ - I love it all! Awesome poem 👏💖

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top story ! ❤️

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    The last line - “and do try and get some sleep!” - so relatable hahah. Nicely done!

  • Whoaaa, that was such an adventure! I absolutely loved it! Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Gorgeous!! Congratulations on top story!

  • Brenton Fabout a year ago

    We thrive in our choices as we give our light to the voiceless! Another brilliant piece - good work!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Your words here are so relatable! This is so creatively done and I really love how you ended it! 😍❤️ Awesome job and congrats on TS!! 🤗🤗❤️❤️

  • Naomi Goldabout a year ago

    So imaginative and relatable! 👏🏼

  • Hannah Loganabout a year ago

    Depressed writer in the dark Listens to painfully, traumatic autobio audiobook While reading poetry from the like-minded Leaves witty comment A little dark, but not Suicidal-like... Because she is not. But even writer depressed And multi-tasking Neednotbeboring When leaving a compliment for a worthy wordsmith. **************** Lights on to u.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is fabulous! Congrats on the top story.

  • Congratulations on your Awesome ✨ Top Story🎉😉❤️📝✨

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Oh this is a goody. Love the last line (and do try to get some sleep!), How true, how many times do I wake up to see the scribble I wrote in the middle of the night. Congratulations on Top Story

  • Harmony Kentabout a year ago

    I’m delighted to see this as Top Story! Congratulations, Dana 💖

  • Dylan about a year ago

    This was amazing! Congrats on top story!

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