Dawn's Complaint
An "Alba" is a poem showcasing Lovers' complaint about Dawn in Troubadour Canon
What is a TROUBADOUR? a finder, a composer of verses. The verb trobar in Old Provencal means to find, to experience that point when the line of poetry fits together, each word together, each line, each stanza. A finder of solutions.
An ALBA is a conventional form in medieval Provencal poetry, especially that of the wandering troubadours, where the Lover or Lovers complain of the approach of sunrise.
One famous poet was named Macabru, nicknamed Pan-Perdut, or French Toast. Legend says he was a foundling.
(Old Provencal sounds something like a mix of French and Spanish.)
Dawn’s (alba magick perdu : PLANH) Complaint
Dawn’s Complaint.
In Natural Setting.
Pastorella go put aside your sheep
to come and dance with me.
Pan-Perdut
son of Marca Bruna
neath such Luna
[díos mio,
tal luna!]
pipsqueak protégé of a trobador
called Cercamon
But ay may! how the dawn hastes faste!
He sang the praises of the men of this world,
and was plaintiff for their sighs
thru lay and clergymen alike,
that was pain-perdu,
lil lost bread so light a feedling
lostling foundling often lust in nursing
peter-pan trovaba pipi
[agreed to terms]
and found pace in pax
aesthetic nudity never grown up
flourishing thru the pact of peace
after much wandering, warring
and haranguing—
Gargantuan the resources,
all the foodstuffs and the bed-stuffs and
his educational funding.
And aye maye! how the dawn hastes faste
and ouch! how the dawn breakes faste!
Pipi Pepe, Dawn’s Complanh is bitching,
Gotta go!
Ades sera l’Alba,
Aye Maye! Alba!
PAN PERDUT where is the patron
who sustains ur verse
YOU
who
much yrself prayzing in yore singing
and blasming the autres trobadorz
Petite-Carotte French Tost,
You’ll hafta make your own breakfast soon—!
but th’alba comes aye maye how faste the dawn hastes!
About the Creator
Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462
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My mind is spinning! Absolute madness by the end, I think, yet so fun at the same time. Wow. All the languages interrupting and adding texture and character, I love it all. I find myself agreeing that the dawn is coming too fast. Time does slip away, doesn't it? Loved learning about Albas and troubadours. I'm a sucker for language history, so that was a treat. 👏🏻❤️🫠