Dad's eyes ocean blue
my son inherited the hue.
Daughter envious.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Hi Babs - From this Blue-Eyed Senior to you. I know you are ensconced within the splinter groups that this old fashion Storyteller/Schtick artist is not invited into. But, please take (3) minutes to view my "Such a Deal." If you can't relate I will offer you a refund; restocking fee exempt. I'm just so proud that after the 'Salvation Army' viewed the piece they offered me a j.o.b....FerReal..! Jbud.in.l.a.
Very Nice! I bet both sets are gorgeous!
This was lovely!
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Awwww. My son has blue eyes like his Daddy too. 🥰