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Eclipse challenge

By emaPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Encounter of two types of different species

Cosmonauts like no others with helmets to hide their faces

Leaving behind old thoughts and unintelligible languages

Improving their capacity to swim against the wind

Painting planets with colors that no one has ever seen.

Satellites sailing paired unchained

Engines with separate hearts and the same key.


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  • Stephen A. Roddewigabout a month ago

    We demand more cosmonaut-based literature. Or at least I do 😁

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    This is beautiful and awesome 👏🏽

  • TheSpinstressabout a month ago

    Beautiful! I love 'swim against the wind'.

  • "Painting planets with colors that no one has ever seen." "Engines with separate hearts and the same key." I loved these two lines the most! Your Acrostic had me mesmerized!

  • John Cox2 months ago

    I loved your acrostic, Ema. Especially the final line: Engines with separate hearts and the same key.

  • Lana V Lynx2 months ago

    You’ve had me at “cosmonauts.” Very nice!

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