Castles In The Air
Daring Determination
in the still of the forest on the edge of the sea
lies a mound of regrets that I harbor for free
if I can't move the mountain, then the mountain moves me
so, I dig in my roots like the mighty oak tree
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through the gravel and sand, I push my way through
determined there is nothing that I cannot do
stronger than the storm as the battle ensues
so much stronger than anything you ever knew
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beaten and battered still no worse for the wear
keep throwing your shade and poking the bear
I will continue to build my castles in the air
look you straight in the eye, cause the devil may care
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (3)
Love it! Especially that punchy ending. Well done. 👏
Yeah, poking the bear, while you overshadow the poker! Good job!
That's it Kelli shoot for the stars.