Bubble Bath Queen
A Self Care Queen’s Luxuries
Insatiably I
Draped lavish jewels
Around my neck, laid
Alluringly in
My porcelain bed,
And ravished my gold.
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Then I soaked myself
With iridescent pearls,
Caressed my skin in
Velvet luxuries,
Soothed my racing heart
Under silky sheets.
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Dripping in riches,
I bewitchingly
Popped the bottle of
Bubbly, poured it down
In my white chalice,
Filled up to the brim.
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A fountain of perfection
Gleaming —
Brilliantly inside.
Extravagance upon one glance
An abundance, there
in my reflection.
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Visions of opals
Adorned my thoughts, an
Exquisite first sip,
Lusciously warmed me,
Kissing opulence
Upon my body.
- Bubble Bath Queen
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Comments (18)
OOOH! This is positively soothing and delightful. Falling asleep in heavenly bliss. Wonderful poetry.
Nice work ❤️ I’m new here hope my stories are good 😊 just like the ways you guys get to top stories
Great poem and congrats on top story!
Congrats and I love it! ❤️❤️❤️
In all honesty I was wondering what was taking so long with this becoming a top story. Vocal's curating team is fickle like that. Thankfully it's got the attention it deserves. It's a great poem as always Nikki.
Well written post! Hopefully we can support each other’s artistic careers!
Congratulations its an amazing story😍🥳🥳
hello everyone iam a new writer here i wish u all look on my profile and read my stories
Gosh, this was just so gorgeous! I loved it so much! Congratulations on your Top Story! I've subscribed to you as well!
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🥳😉♥️🌟
This is wonderful. Congrats on the TS
Congratulations on your Top Story, well deserved
not surprised! back to say congrats on Top Story!
I would love to have a peaceful bubble bath
How awesome this sounds and how much I wish I could enjoy a bath. I'm a shower girl and a fidget. By the time I "sit" in the tub, I'm ready to hop out and "do things" .. Just can't sit that still.
saw that this was republished! still so great! right side of sensual with a eloquent sense of luxury!
Just saw this submitted recently for the sensational poem challenge along with "Spicy." How've ya' been, Nicky?
Gosh darn. Vocal deleted not just my comment, but our entire convo from here too.
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