As a boy,
I became a keen collector
of bricks.
I started out modestly –
Little half-bricks
of self-doubt.
Before long I had so many
I had to keep them
In a brick bag
Lashed to my back.
Occasionally,
I would find,
Big, heavy bricks –
I found a cinderblock
First day of school.
When I was nine,
a teacher slipped
One into my bag.
But generally,
I inherited the
Big bricks from
Broken relationships.
My collection
Mostly comprised of
The common house brick.
Simple blocks of
Isolation
Loneliness
Uncertainty
And fear.
Easy to find
If you know
Where to look.
Insult – brick for my back
Put-down – brick for my back
Rejection – another brick.
At forty-five
The sheer weight of
So many bricks
Became crippling.
So, I decided to
Build a house.
But my bricks were
Old
Cracked
Crumbling
Unstable.
The best I could muster
Was a poorly
Constructed shelter.
So, now I make
My own bricks;
Better bricks.
My bag has
Been set aside.
Now, I lay them
As I make them.
This shelter is
No longer enough.
I think I might be
Making a home.
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