Photo taken by Guilherme Christmann
“I am excited
to never see you again,”
Breeze said to the trees
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (21)
Heart touching
You've captured a perspective I'd not seen before. Lovely piece! Congratulations on TS.
Excellent
Your compelling and skillfully written story kept me eagerly anticipating the next developments, skillfully blending emotions and suspense for a truly captivating experience. I'd appreciate it if you could also take a moment to read my work!
I've come back to this a few times now. I love it.
This is beautifu
This is beautiful in a really unusual way; it feels fleeting and light, and somehow infused with the joy of impermanence.
I am easily distressed by haikus in general as they often leave me with a sense of incompletion. You choreographed this beautifully making this venue seem light and refreshing.
Short and sweet, right up my street!
Nice one, beautifully written... Really lovely...
Brilliant! My son has waged war with the wind since a young boy... "Wind! Stop!"
Fresh!!!!
congratulations on your TS status. This is a beautiful way to say goodbye to a heartache. Love it.
I am in total awe of how a simple statement can have an incredible amount of depth behind it. And the way you framed it as a haiku is brilliant. Beautiful job on this!
Fabulous work! Keep it up—congratulations!
I love 😍 this 👌👌
Mmm, this has got me thinking. I can see the trees not wanting the breeze but why doesn't the breeze want to see the trees again? Or is it because it can never see the trees? See? Thinking....
I love the characterisation of the breeze as excited. Makes it puppy like.
Beautifully written, congratulations, Great writing.
This is beautifully written. Well done.
Very realistic