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Bored Bette

A poem

By Mother CombsPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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Sitting for hours

To have her picture done

Daring not to move

Not even to blink

For fear that the painter

Will get everything all wrong

Eyes lined with red

From staring fixedly all day

Wishing for a break

But to scared to request one

Sat for so long

With arms crossed before her

She could feel her hands

Start to merge into one

The phantom itch on her nose

Not going unnoticed

Driving her up the wall

This is the last time

That Bette agrees

To have her image painted

On the back

Of a silver-plated mirror

With nothing else to do

For the boredom is killing her,

No, it’s eating her alive.

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Denise E Lindquist4 months ago

    Wow, that happened once upon a time! It is hard to get a family picture now as no one is used to sitting still for long😂

  • My anxiety and impatience would never let me sit still, that too for hours, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Isn't it nice to live in an age where a painter may simply snap a few photographs from which to interpret one's visage? Worse than a cat scan!

  • Daphsam4 months ago

    I am sure it was so boring to sit still like that for a painting! Great description and story! I could feel her boredom!

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