
all those bloody haikus
they are always way too short
just enough hook to reel you in
but not enough to get really caught
i don’t know about anyone else
a bit ripped off is how i feel
a frenzied seventeen syllable starburst
and then nothing but the still
(tumbleweeds and crickets)
but once you're five syllables in
there’s no turning back
it’s like wanting a meal
but getting a snack
five seven five
so much less is so much more
ahhh the mysterious east
it’s a Zen thing i am sure
hats off to all of those practitioners
of this form of literary art
who said it best said it for less
a winnowing of words from the start
there’s no right there’s no wrong
there’s no plot there’s no long
there just is
om
.
.
.
In closing I would like to quote one of Australia's greatest philosophical minds, tried to find a video or a sound clip of His Royal Rodneyness (Get Rude on, Get Rude on) but couldn't:
"No No No, Fuckin No!" Rodney Rude

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