Billie Jo
Likes to frolic really slow
Through the garden
Tiptoeing on toes of ten
So that she doesn’t crush the flowers
That grows after the spring showers
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Wearing a crown of posies
All while she moseys
She picks roses
Then, in a vase, she sets them in poses
Until she is happy
I know, this poem is sappy
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It’s crazy
But her favorite is a daisy
Pink, red, or white
They are just right
For making chains
And sometimes airplanes
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Billie Jo is a dinosaur
And once, she rode in a flying saucer
To the moon
What a boon!
She was glad to go home
For it was weird under that glass dome
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Her mother, a beacon of warmth, likes to bake
Cookies or cake
There’s always a treat
For one to eat
When you visit
And at the table, you sit
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Wearing her flowery skirt
She likes to dance and flirt
When she’s out
And running about
Doing this or that
Or petting her kitty-cat
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Billie Jo is a Brontasaurus
Her mind is like a Thesaurus.
She knows her words
And likes to sing her chords
All while writing her songs
And listening for the meal gongs
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She’s a gentle soul
Who is happy with her role
Of being a friend
Til the very end
Billie Jo maybe slow
But she’s always on the go
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Comments (5)
That was a lot of fun. Well done.
Billie Jo the Bronto.... Beautifully done here MC!! This zany piece brought a giant smile to my face as a read it!!
Bronto is my next favorite dino to T-REX. I love the bad guys, always siding with the jerks.. But Bronto seems to be having a wonderful time here. So cool.
I know that I said that we're BFFs but I wanna be BFF with Billie Jo too! I wanna go to the moon with her! I wanna eat the cakes and cookies baked ny her mom!
Awe, this dinosaur is cute!