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Baby Bird

A love poem for my daughter

By Leslie WritesPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Baby bird

My word

Soft as silk

But that tiny beak can peck

Eyes Wide

My pride

You step out

Away from the nest

Each peep

A leap

To grow up

And fly the coop

nature poetrylove poemsinspirationalchildrens poetry
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About the Creator

Leslie Writes

Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.

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  • Lynn Fenske10 months ago

    I was inspired by your entry so wrote a love poem of my own. https://vocal.media/poets/this-kiss

  • Cendrine Marrouat10 months ago

    So cute, Leslie!

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    That is so sweet. Well done, Leslie.

  • Loved this. I kept thinking of my kids flying away from the nest just like the baby bird.

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Super sweet and short love poem!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Brilliant beautiful love poem!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Simply Gorgeous 💖😉💛🌴👣✨Great Piece💕📝😍🌱☺️

  • Awww, this was so sweet! Sometimes they just grow up so fast! Wonderful poem!

  • Donna Renee10 months ago

    Aww!! This is so great!! 🥰🥰

  • Heidi McCloskey10 months ago

    So sweet!

  • Lynn Fenske10 months ago

    Love it! Reads like a Grand Prize winner to me.

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I love it! Great poem!

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