Autumn In The Shire
This is my fifth new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge
This is my fifth new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge
A sonnet for my Muse and her daughter and the comfort that she gives to me with her love and support.
The music is a beautiful song and video from my friend Jane Willow who you can find on Bandcamp below.
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The Leaves Turn From Green Then To Gold
We Walk Holding Hands Under Trees
Autumn Is With Us Running Free
We Will Tell Tales That Were Untold
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Half Foots, Wizards With Dwarves and Elves
Holding You In This World of Light
I’ll Always Love You,Treat You Right
Under Magic Skies, You’re My Belle
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You Give Me Comfort With Your Love
As Autumn Leaves Fall From Above
To Hold You Close, A Perfect Dream
My Beautiful Muse, A Vision Seen
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Walking With Autumn In The Shire
We Are Together, Love Inspired
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Comments (3)
Your beautiful poem intertwined very well with Jane's beautiful song. I loved it so much!
Love the image, poem, and song. They all go together so well!
Beautiful and the song ,too.