Love at first sight
I thought was a myth.
Yet, when I first laid eyes on you,
I felt a chemical response.
*
What were those butterflies doing in my stomach,
Cartwheels? The Cha-cha?
Heat rose in my face ... and elsewhere.
I couldn't have looked away if I wanted to.
*
Your expression reflected mine -
Wide eyed, mouth a-gape.
We approached each other,
Closing the distance in tentative anticipation.
*
I saw only you in the crowd, your eyes didn't waver.
With shaky voices, we exchanged names.
I took your hand, feeling an electrical charge
Surge through my body.
*
We danced, uncertain of our relationship,
Knowing it was going somewhere.
Years later, I look at you
With the same wonder.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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