Approaching chaos
Written for Poppy's March Prompt
On a shining summer sunday
Clouds are appearing far away
They're filled with anger
Like a burly evil angel
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The mother nature
Is in danger
The animals can feel the increasing tension
That we don't have to mention
Preys and predators now become equal
In the sky flying eagle
Warns everyone
The only solution is to run
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
All creatures are panicking
They have no idea, what's coming
In the distance lightnings sparkles
How frightening!
The storms is threathening
The little spiderwebs are shaking
While thunders repeating
It's just the beginning
Of something big...
Hail is falling
The wind is blowing away the birdnests
Using that they're helpless
There's no power
That could calm down the weather...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is the story
How the sunny became stormy
And the brave turned into timid
In less than a minute.
Written for Poppy's March Prompt:
And for RM Stockton's Unofficial Challenge:
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Comments (6)
Really great imagery!
Another great one, Anna! This is so vividly descriptive.
Well, one person has power over even the biggest storm. By the way, even in the biggest storms, the most beautiful thing is that it ends once and the sunshine is beautiful afterwards.
Wow, this was intense. This poem flowed so well, and it felt like an epic opening to a larger story!
Love the title and the poem that follows. Great entry!!!
Good job! I like the description of the "burly evil angel". Also, you make a very interesting observation about how the coming storm "equalizes" the predators and the prey, as they all fear what is coming. There is an analogy underlying this, regarding how tragedy and disaster have an equalizing effect on humans.