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Another Flower in the Sun

Ode to the Sunflow

By Kelly RobertsonPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2023
Another Flower in the Sun
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Amongst the weeds

and the TALL grass

sits another flower

growing in the sun

s t r e t c h i n g

blooming

drinking

in the purest rays

of liquid gold

while its roots

dig shallow

trails beneath

the hard-packed soil.

Amongst the weeds

and the TALL grass

another flower greets the dawn

a golden compass

searching

turning

tracking

the passage of time

in its arc across the sky

till twilight swoops in

and tucks it's petals in

to await another

rising sun.

Amongst the weeds

and the TALL grass

another flower grows

along the roadside

watching

waiting

wondering

if today will be the day

it's chosen

plucked from the soil

before it withers

like all the other

flowers in the sun.

Amongst the weeds

and the TALL grass

sits a beautiful flower

embodying the sun

shining

blossoming

PROUD

growing high above the rest

to remind us that even

simple and ordinary things

can be beautiful

as it dutifully follows

the sun.

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About the Creator

Kelly Robertson

Wrangler of chaos. Creator of more. Writing whatever my heart desires, from fantasy to poetry and more!

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Comments (21)

  • Antoinette L Brey12 months ago

    Nice poem, congratulations on TS

  • Kelly Khoo12 months ago

    A radiant ode to resilience and beauty in simplicity.

  • ROCK 12 months ago

    A pleasant and lyrical read; thank you!

  • This was a amazing. Your poetic voice is breathtaking. Well done!

  • A very beautiful nature poem extolling the wonderful nature of flowers. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Test12 months ago

    Beautiful, Kelly. I can feel the sun and the grass and breathe the flowers through your wonderful words! 💕🙂

  • Novel Allen12 months ago

    Gosh darned beautifully wonderfully stated. Finally someone celebrates me picking the wildflowers during the summer months, i keep them until they are dry then they last on dry as just as lovely. Adorable poetry Kelly. KudosTS

  • Anna12 months ago

    loved it! and congrats on top story!

  • Dana Stewart12 months ago

    This is beautiful and I’m not saying that because sunflowers are my favorite but they are!

  • Donna Renee12 months ago

    Ahhhh beautiful, Kelly!! I adore sunflowers (and their seeds too haha)

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh12 months ago

    As a Kansan with sunflowers growing outside my door, I dearly love this poem and I'm sharing it with my other Sunflower State friends! You plucked this sunflower and preserved it in poetry for us to enjoy.

  • Jazzy 12 months ago

    I loved the repetition so much! ❤️

  • Oneg In The Arctic12 months ago

    I really enjoyed this, and I loved how you played with the font and spacing ☺️

  • Congratulations on This Brightly Fantastic Top Story💯❤️❗

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • Harbor Benassa12 months ago

    The segment describing the sunflower as a "golden compass" was brilliant! Great job.

  • Gina C.12 months ago

    This is absolutely gorgeous, Kelly!!

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Lovely absolutely lovely!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    This is beautiful. Well done.

  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    Great work!

  • Test12 months ago

    Lovely. You have to appreciate the ordinary sunflower. Ordinary to most, not to me. I love the happiness of flowers. They're so special.💙Anneliese

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