Another Flower in the Sun
Ode to the Sunflow
Amongst the weeds
and the TALL grass
sits another flower
growing in the sun
s t r e t c h i n g
blooming
drinking
in the purest rays
of liquid gold
while its roots
dig shallow
trails beneath
the hard-packed soil.
Amongst the weeds
and the TALL grass
another flower greets the dawn
a golden compass
searching
turning
tracking
the passage of time
in its arc across the sky
till twilight swoops in
and tucks it's petals in
to await another
rising sun.
Amongst the weeds
and the TALL grass
another flower grows
along the roadside
watching
waiting
wondering
if today will be the day
it's chosen
plucked from the soil
before it withers
like all the other
flowers in the sun.
Amongst the weeds
and the TALL grass
sits a beautiful flower
embodying the sun
shining
blossoming
PROUD
growing high above the rest
to remind us that even
simple and ordinary things
can be beautiful
as it dutifully follows
the sun.
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Kelly Robertson
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Nice poem, congratulations on TS
A radiant ode to resilience and beauty in simplicity.
A pleasant and lyrical read; thank you!
This was a amazing. Your poetic voice is breathtaking. Well done!
A very beautiful nature poem extolling the wonderful nature of flowers. Congratulations on Top Story!
Beautiful, Kelly. I can feel the sun and the grass and breathe the flowers through your wonderful words! 💕🙂
Gosh darned beautifully wonderfully stated. Finally someone celebrates me picking the wildflowers during the summer months, i keep them until they are dry then they last on dry as just as lovely. Adorable poetry Kelly. KudosTS
loved it! and congrats on top story!
This is beautiful and I’m not saying that because sunflowers are my favorite but they are!
Ahhhh beautiful, Kelly!! I adore sunflowers (and their seeds too haha)
As a Kansan with sunflowers growing outside my door, I dearly love this poem and I'm sharing it with my other Sunflower State friends! You plucked this sunflower and preserved it in poetry for us to enjoy.
I loved the repetition so much! ❤️
I really enjoyed this, and I loved how you played with the font and spacing ☺️
Congratulations on This Brightly Fantastic Top Story💯❤️❗
Congrats on the TS
The segment describing the sunflower as a "golden compass" was brilliant! Great job.
This is absolutely gorgeous, Kelly!!
Lovely absolutely lovely!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
This is beautiful. Well done.
Great work!
Lovely. You have to appreciate the ordinary sunflower. Ordinary to most, not to me. I love the happiness of flowers. They're so special.💙Anneliese