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An Ode to My Breakfast

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By Donna Fox (HKB)Published 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
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An Ode to My Breakfast
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My eyes danced in excitement,

As my fingers found the spot.

I breathed heavily,

as I pulled at the cover.

Peeling it away,

And revealing your firm bareness.

I licked my lips hungry,

Holding your flesh in my hand.

Bringing it to my lips,

Your juices squirted everywhere.

Dripping down my chin,

As I devoured every inch.

Near the end,

I sucked the centre,

Looking for one last juicy morsel.

Finished,

I licked my fingers clean in satisfaction.

Authors Note:

This poem came to me over a rather messy encounter at breakfast after I had read Naomi’s story Meet Me at Our Spot. Which if you haven't read it, i highly recommend it!

For the record, I had a peach for breakfast. So get your head out of the gutter and re-read this, thinking of stone fruit not eggplants. 😜

But I guess this could be open for interpretation…

Thank you for the read!

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  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Peachy!!! Loving your breakfast ode!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Real Poetic8 months ago

    Now I’m hungry for some fruit! Lovely ode!

  • Dean F. Hardy8 months ago

    You did this really well, Donna. And no, I will not come out of the gutter. ☘

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Luscious and inviting is what I'll call this. Even if it was a peach lol. You could sell anything with the way you put together words. Very well done!!!

  • Hannah Moore8 months ago

    Could not skip past this title!

  • Naomi Gold8 months ago

    This is gorgeous writing! It’s like you combined the Sensational and Ode to Ordinary challenges and elevated a piece of fruit to a sensual experience. Which it actually is for me. I love peach season so much. 🍑 And I think all good poems have a double meaning, a continuous metaphor. Then people can choose which one speaks to them more.

  • Novel Allen8 months ago

    Well, I am disowning my second child. What happened to the angelic child that I raised. Well, I never. All the people below, shame on you all. Refund please, thank you Heaven. Naomi....

  • ema8 months ago

    Peaches or not, seems to be a great breakfast anyway 😂, congratulations for the imagination!

  • Rachel Deeming8 months ago

    It is...suggestive! But full of sensual imagery! Loved it!

  • Grz Colm8 months ago

    Lots of great sensory language! Good job. ☺️

  • Lol, shoulda known Naomi's story brought this on 🤣 I'll get my mind out of the gutter when you do, lol! I loved your 🍑 poem. Now it seems like you were talking about a different kinda peach 🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Mark Gagnon8 months ago

    Time for a cold shower oh and breakfast. Yup, breakfast 🥞

  • ThatWriterWoman8 months ago

    How very juicy of you, Donna! Seriously though this is so well written with vivid imagery! I really felt all the senses you were writing about. Nicely done!

  • Rob Angeli8 months ago

    I have indeed read that wild little story! beautifully written and multifarious ode on your part. You make breakfast seem so naughty!

  • Wether a peach or the gutter this was amazing 🤩 you really nailed this I am awe struck simply blown away

  • Alexander McEvoy8 months ago

    That was a very good poem! If I wasn’t hungover it would have me hungry 😅 Definitely open to interpretation;) Simply marvellous!

  • Matthew Daniels8 months ago

    I like the Hobbit energy. Who's up for second breakfast? 😉

  • J. S. Wade8 months ago

    Nothing better than a succulent peach in the morning. Especially when the sweet juice squirts and drips off of my chin. Great way to start the day! Hahaha Great Ode, Donna.

  • Mackenzie Davis8 months ago

    LOL I love this! So clever, and full of vivid imagery. Great one, Donna 😜😂❤️

  • Mohammed Darasi8 months ago

    Nice double entendre throughout 🤣🤣 works perfectly though for either

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