Alienation
A Meeting of the Minds
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I expected it — I was notified
I accepted it — aware and clear-eyed
Therefrom came the scheduled rendezvous
My Star Caller, punctual, followed through
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As ethereal, mega-headed, and telepathic
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In agreement with my intuition
It accepted my precondition
It would not communicate
Or otherwise concentrate
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With anyone else extrasensorate
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Lest a whirlwind of complex humanity
Confound it in cultures contradictory
I needed to break it in gently
To the foibles of mankind's assembly
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And risk not, tragically, alienate
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I considered first contact, at least,
With a rabbi, an imam, or priest
But even that could involve trysts
Of subtly misread, misunderstood risks
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Simple mistakes incompatibly mutate
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No, I needed to go even humbler
Lest make the usual human blunder
Of solipsistic hubris, misassumption,
Leading our summit to fruitless disjunction
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Essential to avoid the ill-passionate
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Who should I deem it meet
To avoid our unavoidable conceit?
Who, from it, should we dutifully hide,
Those it couldn't, wouldn't, shouldn't abide?
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The very same saboteurs who pontificate
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Where are the Kings, Mother Theresas, and Ghandis
And the Mandelas we ideally embrace so fondly
When sidestepping the ubiquitous, quotidian cruelties
That the rest of us wear so proudly as jewelry?
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The deceit, invectives, and racism used to subjugate
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It turns out I met it, impotently, to befriend us
But with no one I trusted to fairly represent us
Until there appeared a proxy enchanted
Who was always there but taken for granted
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Man's best friend, incarnate
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He greeted the being satisfactory
With wagging inquiries olfactory
Opened its mouth to invite it
And have faith his jowls wouldn't bite it
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More than enough to appreciate
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This oral seduction inviting to trust
Between dog and Star Caller was decisively sussed
Giving the gentle but powerful canine
The benefit of the doubt without reading his mind
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Neither a biting-the-hand-that-feeds-it correlate
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"For surely," said Star Caller, "this gentle sentience
Could tear my flesh apart in temperamental violence.
But taking my limb so softly, with such teeth
Dignifies sweet innocence underneath."
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Host and guest forged a whole world's fate
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"I've seen enough," concluded Star Caller.
"How can I wreck a planet that's smaller
Than the love such a creature has for its friend
And who will live for him till the very end?"
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Without judgment, scoring, or debate
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Star Caller returned to the skies, aimed at his Sun
To report back to those whence he had come
En route called, but once, via quantum transmitter
To put down a deposit for the pick of the litter
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About the Creator
Gerard DiLeo
Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!
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Comments (6)
I have to agree with the other comments your word choice is simply sublime ☺️
I loved your choice of words! So beautiful! My favourite part was the biting the hand that feeds. Loved your poem!
That would be an effective way to butter the Star Caller up. None of those other ambassadors would be able to do it. Cool idea!
Great take on the challenge and I loved the light ending. Your word play is exemplary.
Wonderful!!! Wonderfully written!!!❤️❤️💕
This was great. Word choice, social commentary, and a miniature story come together well. The end is so very appropriate. Really enjoyed reading this.